Control Systems Software Mini-Review: April 16, 2010

Review Schedule

  • Material to web site: COB Tue April 6, 2010
  • Response from reviewers due: COB Tue April 13, 2010
  • Design group's response to reviewer comment: COB Thur April 15, 2010
  • Review meeting: Fri April 16, 2010 (all times are HST)
    • 8:00 AM: Setup, welcome, and introductions
    • 8:15 AM: Presentations
    • 9:30 AM: Break
    • 9:45 AM: Review committee comments discussion and questions
    • 10:45 AM: Review committee closed session
    • 11:15 AM: Review committee feedback to team

  • Videoconference IP: 128.171.99.70 (hualalai)
  • Telecon number: 1-877-280-4645 Guest Room: 540030

Review Panel

Thank you for your participation in the review process and for helping to ensure the success of the NGAO Project.
  • Al Conrad (WMKO, chair)http://www.oir.caltech.edu/twiki_oir/bin/edit/Keck/NGAO/ControlSystemsSWMiniReview#
  • Rich Dekany (COO)
  • Don Gavel (UCO)
  • John Cromer (CalTech)

Review Presentation

Review materials

The design documents prepared for this review were frozen as of 16-Apr-10, 17:00 HST. To view the most current version of any of the documents after the review, refer to the NGAO NewKAONs master site.

  • Charge to Reviewers

  • Requirements Compliance Matrix

  • Design Documents
    • KAON 714 AO Controls Software Preliminary Design document
      • Note2010apr07 above link changed to .pdf
    • KAON 732 NGAO Data Server Preliminary Design Document

Supplemental / Backup Materials for Reference Only (links to most current)

  • System Level
    • KAON 511 Original NGAO System Design Document
    • KAON 642 Design changes that have been selected subsequent to the NGAO System Design Review (SDR)
    • KAON 636 Description of the features and functions of the design described in the SDM will be used to carry out the observations described in the science cases (OOCD)
    • KAON 705 High-level summary of the AO control loops used during night-time operations
    • KAON 735 Detailed review of the AO Facility main sequence.
    • KAON 736 Detailed review of the Laser Facility main sequence.
  • Hardware
    • KAON 668 NGAO Device Control Architecture Description
    • KAON 682 NGAO Detailed Master Device List .xls spreadsheet
    • KAON 715 NGAO Motion Control Architecture Description
  • Software
    • KAON 569 System Design Phase report describing the system design for the Non-Real-Time Controls
    • KAON 671 Description of the Component Based Developement model that will be used for NGAO
    • KAON 679 Description of the software architecture for the NGAO control system that will be used as the foundation for designing and implementing the control system

Responses To Reviewer Comments

  • Repsonses to John Cromer's comments .doc
  • Responses to Al's comments .doc
  • Responses to Rich's comments .doc
  • Responses to Don's comments .doc

  • Responses to Peter's Section 4 comments .doc
  • Responses to Peter's Section 5&6 comments .doc
  • Responses to Viswa's comments .doc

Reviewers' final report

Topic attachments
I Attachment History Action Size Date Who Comment
Microsoft Word filedoc 714-DonGavel.doc r1 manage 37.0 K 2010-04-16 - 08:42 KevinTsubota Don's comments and responses
Microsoft Excel Spreadsheetxls AO_Controls_CompliancePacket.xls r2 r1 manage 168.5 K 2010-04-06 - 05:16 KevinTsubota New Requirements Compliance Matrix
PDFpdf AO_controls_miniReview.pdf r1 manage 570.0 K 2010-04-16 - 08:51 KevinTsubota Control Software mini-review presentation
PowerPointppt AO_controls_miniReview.ppt r1 manage 1741.5 K 2010-04-16 - 08:47 KevinTsubota Control Software mini-review presentation
Microsoft Word filedoc CromerComments.doc r3 r2 r1 manage 60.5 K 2010-04-15 - 02:33 KevinTsubota John Cromer's comments and responses
Microsoft Word filedoc KAON_714-Review_PW.doc r2 r1 manage 113.0 K 2010-04-15 - 02:30 KevinTsubota Peter's Section 5 & 6 comments and repsonses
PDFpdf KAON_714_AO_Control_System_Design.pdf r3 r2 r1 manage 1068.7 K 2010-04-07 - 19:26 KevinTsubota KAON 714: NGAO AO Control System Design Document
Microsoft Word filedoc KAON_714_AO_Control_System_Design_v1_2.doc r1 manage 4904.5 K 2010-04-07 - 03:07 KevinTsubota KAON 714: AO Controls Software mini-review design doc
PDFpdf KAON_732_NGAO_Data_Server_Prelim_Design.pdf r1 manage 230.1 K 2010-04-05 - 23:48 KevinTsubota KAON 732: NGAO Data Server Prelim Design Doc
Microsoft Word filedoc PWCommentsSec4.doc r3 r2 r1 manage 172.5 K 2010-04-14 - 19:55 KevinTsubota Peter's Section 4 comments and responses
Microsoft Word filedoc Rich_Dekany714.doc r1 manage 29.5 K 2010-04-16 - 03:55 KevinTsubota Rich's comments and responses
Microsoft Word filedoc ViswaCommentsKAON714.doc r1 manage 32.0 K 2010-04-16 - 04:30 KevinTsubota Viswa's comments and repsonses
Microsoft Word filedoc conrad714comments.doc r3 r2 r1 manage 79.5 K 2010-04-15 - 02:40 KevinTsubota Al's comments and responses
PDFpdf softwareMiniReviewCharter_v0.pdf r1 manage 37.9 K 2010-04-06 - 05:26 KevinTsubota Control Systems mini-review charter
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