ControlSystemsSWMiniReview < Keck/NGAO

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---+ Control Systems Software Mini-Review: *April 16, 2010*

---++ Review Schedule
   * Material to web site: COB Tue April 6, 2010
   * Response from reviewers due: COB Tue April 13, 2010
   * Design group's response to reviewer comment: COB Thur April 15, 2010
   * *Review meeting: Fri April 16, 2010* (all times are HST)
      * 8:00 AM: Setup, welcome, and introductions 
      * 8:15 AM: Presentations
      * 9:30 AM: Break 
      * 9:45 AM: Review committee comments discussion and questions 
      * 10:45 AM: Review committee closed session 
      * 11:15 AM: Review committee feedback to team 

   * Videoconference IP: 128.171.99.70 (hualalai)
   * Telecon number: 1-877-280-4645 Guest Room: 540030

---++ Review Panel
Thank you for your participation in the review process and for helping to ensure the success of the NGAO Project.
   * Al Conrad (WMKO, chair)http://www.oir.caltech.edu/twiki_oir/bin/edit/Keck/NGAO/ControlSystemsSWMiniReview#
   * Rich Dekany  (COO)
   * Don Gavel (UCO)
   * John Cromer (!CalTech)

---++ Review Presentation
   * [[%ATTACHURL%/AO_controls_miniReview.ppt][.ppt]]
   * [[%ATTACHURL%/AO_controls_miniReview.pdf][.pdf]]

---++ Review materials
%RED% The design documents prepared for this review were frozen as of 16-Apr-10, 17:00 HST.   To view the most current version of any of the documents after the review, refer to the [[http://www.oir.caltech.edu/twiki_oir/bin/view/Keck/NGAO/NewKAONs][NGAO NewKAONs]] master site. %ENDCOLOR%

   * *Charge to Reviewers*
      * [[%ATTACHURL%/softwareMiniReviewCharter_v0.pdf][.pdf]]

   * *Requirements Compliance Matrix*
      * [[%ATTACHURL%/AO_Controls_CompliancePacket.xls][.xls]]

   * *Design Documents*
      * [[%ATTACHURL%/KAON_714_AO_Control_System_Design.pdf][KAON 714]] AO Controls Software Preliminary Design document
         * %ICON{note}%2010apr07 above link changed to .pdf
      * [[%ATTACHURL%/KAON_732_NGAO_Data_Server_Prelim_Design.pdf][KAON 732]] NGAO Data Server Preliminary Design Document

---++ Supplemental / Backup Materials __for Reference Only__ (links to most current)
   * System Level
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON511_NGAO_SDM_v2.1.doc][KAON 511]] Original NGAO System Design Document
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON642_NGAO_Design_Changes.doc][KAON 642]] Design changes that have been selected subsequent to the NGAO System Design Review (SDR)
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON_636_NGAO_OOCD.doc][KAON 636]] Description of the features and functions of the design described in the SDM will be used to carry out the observations described in the science cases (OOCD)
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%NGAO_Controls_KAON.doc][KAON 705]] High-level summary of the AO control loops used during night-time operations
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON_735_NGAO_AOFacilitySequence.doc][KAON 735]] Detailed review of the AO Facility main sequence.
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON_736_NGAO_LGSFacilitySequence.doc][KAON 736]] Detailed review of the Laser Facility main sequence.
   * Hardware
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON668_NGAO_DeviceArchitecture.doc][KAON 668]] NGAO Device Control Architecture Description
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON682_NGAO_Master_Device_List.xls][KAON 682]] NGAO Detailed Master Device List .xls spreadsheet
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON715_NGAOPrelimMotionDesign.doc][KAON 715]] NGAO Motion Control Architecture Description
   * Software
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%NonRTC_SystemDesign_v22.doc][KAON 569]] System Design Phase report describing the system design for the Non-Real-Time Controls 
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON_671-NGAOContainersComponentModel.pdf][KAON 671]] Description of the Component Based Developement model that will be used for NGAO
      * [[%NGAO_KAON%KAON_679-NGAOControlSWArchitecture_rev1.pdf][KAON 679]] Description of the software architecture for the NGAO control system that will be used as the foundation for designing and implementing the control system

---++ Responses To Reviewer Comments
   * Repsonses to John Cromer's comments [[%ATTACHURL%/CromerComments.doc][.doc]]
   * Responses to Al's comments [[%ATTACHURL%/conrad714comments.doc][.doc]]
   * Responses to Rich's comments [[%ATTACHURL%/Rich_Dekany714.doc][.doc]]
   * Responses to Don's comments [[%ATTACHURL%/714-DonGavel.doc][.doc]]

   * Responses to Peter's Section 4 comments [[%ATTACHURL%/PWCommentsSec4.doc][.doc]]
   * Responses to Peter's Section 5&6 comments [[%ATTACHURL%/KAON_714-Review_PW.doc][.doc]]
   * Responses to Viswa's comments [[%ATTACHURL%/ViswaCommentsKAON714.doc][.doc]]

---++ Reviewers' final report
   * [[%NGAO_KAON%kaon733.pdf][KAON 733]] - Reviewer final report

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I	Attachment	History	Action	Size	Date	Who	Comment
doc	714-DonGavel.doc	r1	manage	37.0 K	2010-04-16 - 08:42	UnknownUser	Don's comments and responses
xls	AO_Controls_CompliancePacket.xls	r2 r1	manage	168.5 K	2010-04-06 - 05:16	UnknownUser	New Requirements Compliance Matrix
pdf	AO_controls_miniReview.pdf	r1	manage	570.0 K	2010-04-16 - 08:51	UnknownUser	Control Software mini-review presentation
ppt	AO_controls_miniReview.ppt	r1	manage	1741.5 K	2010-04-16 - 08:47	UnknownUser	Control Software mini-review presentation
doc	CromerComments.doc	r3 r2 r1	manage	60.5 K	2010-04-15 - 02:33	UnknownUser	John Cromer's comments and responses
doc	KAON_714-Review_PW.doc	r2 r1	manage	113.0 K	2010-04-15 - 02:30	UnknownUser	Peter's Section 5 & 6 comments and repsonses
pdf	KAON_714_AO_Control_System_Design.pdf	r3 r2 r1	manage	1068.7 K	2010-04-07 - 19:26	UnknownUser	KAON 714: NGAO AO Control System Design Document
doc	KAON_714_AO_Control_System_Design_v1_2.doc	r1	manage	4904.5 K	2010-04-07 - 03:07	UnknownUser	KAON 714: AO Controls Software mini-review design doc
pdf	KAON_732_NGAO_Data_Server_Prelim_Design.pdf	r1	manage	230.1 K	2010-04-05 - 23:48	UnknownUser	KAON 732: NGAO Data Server Prelim Design Doc
doc	PWCommentsSec4.doc	r3 r2 r1	manage	172.5 K	2010-04-14 - 19:55	UnknownUser	Peter's Section 4 comments and responses
doc	Rich_Dekany714.doc	r1	manage	29.5 K	2010-04-16 - 03:55	UnknownUser	Rich's comments and responses
doc	ViswaCommentsKAON714.doc	r1	manage	32.0 K	2010-04-16 - 04:30	UnknownUser	Viswa's comments and repsonses
doc	conrad714comments.doc	r3 r2 r1	manage	79.5 K	2010-04-15 - 02:40	UnknownUser	Al's comments and responses
pdf	softwareMiniReviewCharter_v0.pdf	r1	manage	37.9 K	2010-04-06 - 05:26	UnknownUser	Control Systems mini-review charter

Topic revision: r22 - 2010-06-01 - KevinTsubota

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