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Review Panel

Thank you for your participation in the review process and for helping to ensure the success of the NGAO Project.
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  • Design group's response to reviewer comment: COB Thur April 15, 2010
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    • 9:30 AM: Break
    • 9:45 AM: Review committee comments discussion and questions
    • 10:45 AM: Review committee closed session
    • 11:15 AM: Review committee feedback to team
 
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Thank you for your participation in the review process and for helping to ensure the success of the NGAO Project.
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  • Response from reviewers due: COB Tue April 13, 2010
  • Design group's response to reviewer comment: COB Thur April 15, 2010
  • Review meeting: Fri April 16, 2010 8:00am-12:00pm (HST)

  • Videoconference IP: 128.171.99.70 (hualalai)
  • Telecon number: 1-877-280-4645 Guest Room: 540030

Review Panel

Thank you for your participation in the review process and for helping to ensure the success of the NGAO Project.
  • Al Conrad (WMKO, chair)
  • Rich Dekany (CalTech)
  • Don Gavel (Lick)
  • John Cromer (CalTech)

Review materials

  • Charge to Reviewers

  • Requirements

  • Design Documents The design documents prepared for this review were frozen as of 16-Apr-10, 17:00 HST. To view the most current version of any of the documents after the review, refer to the NGAO NewKAONs master site.

  • Response To Reviewer Comments

  • Reviewers' final report
 
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